How's my story doing? Is it: awesome/okay/or terrible? Should I get rid of things or add anything?
Also what do you want to see in my story in future submittions? I'm willing to do anything different.


My Pokemon Journey Part 17"Could you light the fire for me?" "Chimchar, come he " "No, no, Autumn, use your own move." "What?" "Just do it." "What are you trying to do?" Ash said. "I want to see Autumn use a move. She hasn't used one in a while now." "So what if she hasn't?" "She needs to be in practice! She's a Pokémon, isn't she?" "Yeah, but what " "Ash, if you ignored one of your Pokémon for a while, wouldn't they be out of practice?" "Yeah, I guess so, but Autumn is one of my Pokémon." "What?! Ash,My Pokemon Journey Part 17


My Pokemon Journey Part 16"Hey, sis, let's go meet up with your friends," my brother said, pushing me gently along through the woods. "Okay, okay, Mewtwo, I know where I'm going," I said, walking forward so his hands weren't on my back anymore.My Pokemon Journey Part 16
"We should change and teleport," Celebi replied. "Celebi, you need a human name," my brother replied.
"I know I do, and I've already thought of one. My name is going to be Josh." "Wow, Josh, so original," I replied sarcastically.
"Oh just shut up." We all transformed simultaneously and we all teleported about a half a mile from where my friends were camp


My Pokemon Journey Part 15"HOW DARE YOU HARM HER! YOU PROMISED YOU WOULDN'T HARM HER EVER AGAIN!" Celebi cried, stepping in front of me. This probably looked very funny and weird at the same time. I was protecting my brother and Celebi was protecting me. My heart gave a funny leap when I realized that Celebi was protecting me. "Cele Celebi?" I whispered. He turned around to look at me. I had tears in my eyes. "Mew, are you okay?" he asked, coming up to me. He cocked his head to the side. "Mew?" "It's nothing, Celebi " I whispered, trying to wipe the tears from my eyes. "Hey, Mew, you know you caMy Pokemon Journey Part 15


My Pokemon Journey Part 14"Okay, Autumn, you can transform back now," Professor Oak said. I tried to transform back but I was completely shocked when I realized I couldn't. "Autumn, transform back please!" I squealed and started to wave my arms, panicking. "Grandpa, I think something's wrong," Gary said. "I don't think she can transform back." "What?!" Professor Oak cried. Someone suddenly teleported into our midst. "Who are you?!" "I'm Arceus! And Mew's time as a human is up! She's coming with me! That little girl was just a trick to make Autumn transform back into Mew so I could take her human form away!" Arceus' eyes turned greenMy Pokemon Journey Part 14
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Alyssa "Ketcham"
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Member of *Poke-Pals
Real life best friend ~NewMoonNightmare ~hplover13
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